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Story Descriptions

How to Write a Screenplay - Free
download (copyrighted material)
Explains in detail how to write a screenplay (movie), from planning an
idea through developing a plot to finishing the play. Also shows mistakes
not to make, and how to correct ones you do make. Has many tips from Writers
Workshop Script Doctor. This guide was originally written for the National
Writers Workshop program with high school students, and expanded for this
offering. Designed to get you writing from the moment you start reading,
this electronic book has an easy graphic interface, and contains many examples.
This electronic book is available in several formats.
Writers Workshop Script Doctor,
by Dorian Scott Cole. Unavailable - in rewrite. (Primarily for screenplays,
but also for visual writing and basic story development in novels and plays)
Find and repair the twenty most common mistakes that keep your screenplay
off the producer's desk.
If you had a ten thousand dollar car sitting in your drive with a flat
tire, what would you do with it? Park it behind the garage? Shuffle it
around to the car lots trying to sell it as damaged goods? Read a book
on how to design a car? Unless you're eccentric or insane (appreciate that
I'm on dangerous ground here), you would probably invest a few dollars
in fixing the tire - makes sense. But what do you do with a screenplay
that doesn't sell? One you have invested a lot of yourself in, with a potential
value of forty thousand or more. Keep shuffling it around to agents and
contests? Park it on the top shelf of a closet? Read yet another book telling
the same old things? Yes! Writers do with their screenplays what they wouldn't
do with their car.
Writers Workshop Script Doctor shows you how to find and repair
problems with characterization, plot and structure, scenes, and dialogue.
Also packed with information on writing a screenplay, originality, and
getting yourself out of mental ruts. A true writers toolkit. Makes a
great gift!
The text of this book has been incorporated into the Web site, which has gone well beyond the book.
 
Wife For Sale
Comedy (Screenplay and stage play)
Audience: General, business, college, high school
Rating: G
A laid-back television director fantasizes about selling his incessantly
nagging wife. His womanizing college buddy believes she is available and
begins secretly dating her. The director tries to undo the romance, but
she learns of his zany scheme to sell her, and goes for his buddy. (Date
is indefinite.)

Amphoteros - Faces to Reveal, faces to hide
- a double game.
Drama (Stage play)
Audience: business, high school, college, general
Rating: PG-13 (due to a sensitive sexual
topic)
Subplot treats the cause and results of rape and sexual harrassment.
An ambitious amusement park owner invests in a failing plastics factory
to streamline and sell it. His unusual plan to expose the poseurs among
the staff so he can name a new executive officer brings him and the others
face to face with their failings.
This play is in .rtf format and can be opened on most modern word processors.
Download
now (or if you can't download, order by e-mail). Copyrighted material. Charge for staged productions. E-mail order is
no charge, and will be sent to your e-mail address.
 
Cult of Superstition
Drama (Screenplay. Soon to be a stage play.) Does
memory repression happen?
Audience: General
Rating: PG-13(due to a sensitive sexual
topic)
(Extensive courtroom drama. Heavy on psychology and social causes. Sensitive
treatment of sexual abuse. Loosely based on actual cases. Examines the
questions: can memories be totally repressed, and what would cause people
in our society to create false memories?)
A down and out lawyer defends a man who, after being accused by his
own daughter, confesses to sex crimes he can't remember. His friend and
coworker is obviously guilty. The man realizes he didn't do it, and the
lawyer must find a way to absolutely prove that he didn't.
This screenplay is in .rtf format and can be opened on most modern word
processors. Download
now (or if you can't download, order by e-mail). Copyrighted material. Options available. E-mail order is no charge,
and will be sent to your e-mail address.
Critical information for film students:
This screenplay had a window of opportunity created by an alarming
rash of false memories that wrecked many families. It wasn't possible to
complete the screenplay during that window, and another fine similar screenplay
was filmed and shown as a TV movie. This screenplay will be offered as
stage play at a later time.

Riverboat Justice
Action (Screenplay)
Audience: General, minimal violence
Rating: PG-13 (violence)
A burned out specialist in countersurviellance, and a chemist with a
hobby of impersonation, freelance as a comedy team on a gambling riverboat.
When they discover the mafia has taken over the catering business and is
trying to find a way into riverboat gambling - and the police can't stop
them - they plot to run the mafia out of town. They might accomplish the
impossible... if arms dealers don't kill them first.
Read this story online in Lunch
Reading, in ten to fifteen minute segments
Critical
information on Riverboat Justice for film students:
This screenplay had several modifications after a TV movie studio reader
stated what he would prefer to see in it: More high tech, a more hip main
character, more diverse action, and a more fully drawn supporting character
(Dino). Rewrite. The next reader thought a barely visible miniature drone
plane that sprayed poison gas was the same as a stealth bomber - so much
for recognizing high tech. Another reader compared using illusions to FX
and FX-2 - which leads to the theory that there can only be one magician
in the world as the public wouldn't want to see different magic tricks
from a different magician - so much for diversification, and further evidence
that the readers' basic job is to find a reason to screen out screenplays.
And so much for, "It worked before, and this is new and different." Aargh!
I rewrote it four times too many, but it's a good story and I like it.
It's presented here as an example of an overwritten and overcomplicated
plot. It's too busy. It's also an example of putting characterization at
the beginning - something I warn everyone against because it obscures the
plot and doesn't hook anyone with the first ten to twenty minutes of drama.
The first ten pages need to go away, and the arms dealers need to come
out of it, but I'm too busy with other projects to invest any more time
in it unless someone gets interested in it.
 
Priest of Sales
Drama (Play, and Screenplay)
Audience: General, business, college
Rating: PG-13 (sexual themes)
Addresses modern and classic themes of the physical and mental results
of overwork, and of sexuality.
An overworked executive finds her private life destroyed by incessant
business demands. While suffering through her employer's scheme to build
the business and avoid retirement expenses through burning people out,
she tries to save a casanova associate. Through her efforts, she comes
to grips with her own sexuality, and rescues the company.
Screen Novel
Note on ratings:
I am not a professional rating agency and I tend to rate more harshly
than necessary. But there is no exploitation or gratuitous sex, violence,
or language in stories presented here. Use your own best judgment on the
suitability for any particular audience. The stories on these pages aren't
children's tales and are not suitable for pre-teen computer access or presentation
to pre-teens.
Other distribution restrictions: None
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